Concept Stain 001

I'm working on a comic and the deadline for the first 8 pages is June 15^th

So I'm posting the possible character designs for the main character. (I'm hoping it will motivate me more since I almost had all of chapter one drafted but I lost it when I was moving...TT_^TT)

Not quite sure how I plan on handling his hair though...(It will be screen-toned)

Any opinions of the design? (also, don't mind the ink splatter. I was using a dip-pen and messed up....It was also the first time in years I used ink and pen...)


Other design ideas: